"This side" is not needed. It is fine to say "I am fine
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Let me first rewrite the yesterday's error as follows:
you are rewriting the yesterday’s paragraph, not the error.
Day before yesterday, myself registered in M.Phil program at Madras University.
You can say "I registered myself for the M Phil program."
The total strength of my class is ten out of which, males and females are in equal ratio.
Good.
During the first class that is, day before yesterday, the professor who took or who handles Indian Economy class , his name is SS Sundaram, I believe.
You cannot break this sentence into two. you cannot say i believe and complete the sentence.
also, you cannot say who took or who handles both. you decide which one to be used and put that.
see the modified version...
During the first class that is, day before yesterday, the professor who handled "Indian Economy" for us, whose name is SS Sundaram I guess, introduced himself to us and asked us to introduce ourselves to the class.
On the time,
on the time is not the correct usage
i felt confidence on the language and the power of command.
Among us, many hesitated to speak boldly. At the time, myself admired about the boldness on the language whether its correct or wrong. It may not be appreciable, if anyone speaking incorrect English. But if I look back my past, a time when I hesitated or felt uncomfortable to speak English. During the first class itself, I made a friend namely some Dutta. Dutta is his sir name. He is from West Bengal. He finished graduation from Calcutta University and his post graduation from Madras University. He is not only talented but also has deep knowledge in history. Today on the Onam occasion, my college is off. The day is typically idle. I didnt done anything which made me happy or zestful except at present. Tomorrow i planned to go to Saidapet and if possible even to the Taramani. Nothing more to pen down. Note: Thanks lot ever, for your continous efforts. If I repeats any mistake or error forgive me. I try my best not to repeat the same.Bye and Take Care:-)
